Well, I promised I would work on my second draft after finals, and I did. Part One and Part Two have gone through the major overhaul, but Part Three (the largest part) is still waiting for that. Nevertheless, I have decided that since I have two sections that can be viewed, more or less (I still need to go over them again as a whole), I am officially posting the link for you to read them here. If you have comments (or you get lost) tell me and I'll fix what I can. Keep in mind that this excerpt amounts to a little more than half the book at present (this proportion is subject to change, especially with all the changes I will have to make to make part three consistent with the rewrite). Still, I think the stopping place will feel satisfying enough until I can do the rest.
This book is for PG-13 audiences only. If you are an R audience, you will think it is not graphic enough and if you are a PG audience, you will be sad and uneasy. G audiences may or may not understand what is going on, so reader discretion is advised.
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