- Tweak the character arcs and drastically change this character's plot arc.
- Eliminate fluffy characters
- Flesh out important characters
- Generally make things make more sense
- Unify terminology/technology that evolved as I wrote
Edit: I posted a link to my first draft, but I chickened out. I do promise, though, to post a link to the draft I'm currently working on, when it is completed, which won't be until after finals are over.
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